Need help penning an intro for guest

[deadpoeticstar]

ive got a visitors only board for the people who visit my board but i cant think of anything to say as the first post to set their minds at ease any suggestions?

[Tony Reid]

Whats your site about?

[deadpoeticstar]

well its just a general discussion but i created a board so that guest can ask question before signing up.  So now i want to make a sticky with this intro that im wanting to make

[Tony Reid]

I wonder if having locked boards is detrimental to gaining new membership on a general discussion board?

Anyhow, In your case Id suggest letting them know that they should not be afraid of locked boards and tell them know the reasons its locked.... ie: member security etc.

Also it might be worth mentioning that that you dont allow any cliques etc... just a friendly bunch of people... something like that.

Good luck with it.

Tony

[deadpoeticstar]

whats that slogan...its goes like this i think

who what where when why how

is that correct or if it isnt can you correct it for me?

[Tony Reid]

Im not sure - but this order makes sense to me

Who, Where, What, When, How and Why

[deadpoeticstar]

oh ok well tell me what you think of the intro

http://www.crazynlazy.com/index.php?topic=20.0

[Tony Reid]

My personal view is that its cluttered.

I'd suggest using bold for the questions and regular for the answers.

I'd also suggest doing a graphic advert for the "Get rid of the Ad's" instead of filling it up with text.